Maintaining Pacing

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The struggle is real!


Let’s be honest—finding ideas for short stories is the fun part. It’s everything that comes afterward that turns writers into caffeine-dependent zombies struggling with story arc and pacing. But here’s the thing: pacing isn’t just about speed, gunfights or car crashes. It’s about rhythm, and rhythm comes from building strong characters who have something at stake.


When you’re creating tension, every scene needs to earn its place. Ask yourself: does this moment propel the story forward, or am I just showing off my atmospheric prose? (We’ve all been there.) Short stories don’t have the luxury of meandering. Each paragraph should either deepen character, advance plot, or ideally, both.


Self-censorship becomes your unlikely ally here. Yes, that three-page backstory about your protagonist’s childhood hamster might be brilliant—but does it serve the pacing? Probably not. The hard truth is that tight pacing requires ruthless editing. Cut the sentences, characters and scenes that slow the momentum, no matter how much you love them. It's hard to prune your writing, but flabby writing slows down your creativity and will not entice your readers to keep turning pages..


Here’s where building strong characters saves you. When readers care deeply about someone in just a few pages, you can create tension through smaller, quieter moments. Throw in a crisis or a tough decision to be made. Have someone say something negative to them. How your character reacts can take the story in a new direction. A single loaded glance can carry the weight of an entire chapter in a novel.


If you’re struggling with story arc, go back to the basics. Your character wants something, obstacles pop up, something significant in their environment changes.



  • keep your eye on that story arc,
  • trim the excess, and
  • trust that your story will find its pace.


The hamster backstory can live in your deleted scenes file, where all our darlings eventually retire.


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