Crafting Story Arcs

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Riding the Short Story Rollercoaster


Writing short stories often feels like trying to park a bus in a compact car space. You need precision, restraint, and just enough nerve to keep going when you begin to feel like the draft is wobbling off course. One of the biggest hurdles to a writer is finding ideas that are manageable enough to fit the form, but strong enough to leave an impact. A short story cannot survive on atmosphere alone. It needs conflict quickly, which is why creating tension matters from the opening paragraph.


Many writers also battle with self-doubt during the drafting stage. Trust me, that’s not unusual. They polish sentences too early, delete random plot points, or avoid going deeper and writing about emotional risks. Unfortunately, cautious writing usually produces cautious stories. Cautious stories are not exciting! 


Starting can be just as challenging. What helps is to pick an idea, a character name or a situation, and let the words flow. Jot down a few thoughts about where you want your story to go and what characters will live there. Some folks spend a lot of time outlining and moving things around, aiming for perfection. Don’t fall into that self-defeating trap. Being organized is a good practice, but spending too much time on advance preparation won't get that story written. Your first draft should be a bit unruly. You'll tidy it up later when you've finished the piece and begin editing.


Especially in short stories, creating strong characters is essential. Readers have only a few pages to connect with them. A single vivid detail or contradiction can make a character memorable. In my experience, it’s often my characters who tell me what’s going to happen next, in terms of plot, conflict and resolution – and I listen to them.


Here are the first few lines of my novel, Kenora Reinvented.


“The free world wouldn’t topple into chaos if I didn’t conquer my performance anxiety but damn it, my carefully reconstructed life might.


Two years ago, if the Magic 8-Ball had predicted my forty-two-year-old self would willingly return to the place where I’d lurched into unemployment, I'd have tossed it into the garbage. But as I’d learned the hard way, life was unpredictable. Sometimes though, the irony was delicious.”


My objective was to catapult my protagonist onto the page with a strong voice, raise questions for the reader to want answers to (hooks), then set the tone and pace for the rest of the book. It took me many months to get the words and sentences for the opening right. Frustrating, yes, but through trial and error and much editing, I ended up with what I wanted.


Maintaining pacing is important whether you’re writing 500 words, 5,000 words or 50,000 words. Every scene must earn its place or the story will begin to sag under unnecessary exposition.



Writers who are struggling with story arc should remember that short fiction thrives on change. Even a subtle emotional shift can transform a simple anecdote into a satisfying story.



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